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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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fantasies break thru these walls released through insomnia's visit falling freely in the night rain shaping into words on pages sliding into puddles kept as secrets for me now, hidden in the oceans depths [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-24-2003 07:57 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Michelle, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love mermaids and this reminded me of them as the ocean is my favorite place to be and in my dreams I see everything under the ocean surface! (sigh) God Bless You,s weet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
released through insomnia's visit falling freely in the night rain shaping into words on pages ============================ loved the surreal feeling you created with your words and presentation. Well done poetess!! I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I keep my secrets too |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Michele, I love this. Reads well. Means much. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
fantasies?...a puddle?.....this could easily make it to mature content......if I'd written it-it would have been moved there...it's all cuz of that "Toerag" thing I think..but this was a very well written poem gal.....and with my mind, erotic! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
insomnia can ..almost.. be soothing. Though sleep is awfully great! Enjoyed Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is an interesting and ethereal visage, ig... I enjoyed.. Who let Toerag out of his Mature Content room??? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
toeman, its about fantasies, erotic or otherwise, the puddles, well, never thought of it like that, but your spin on it kind of works, too |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
(lol @Nan about Mr. Toe) Michele, secrets, huh???  |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
nice write |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I just love fantasies & rain....they sure work together well. NIcely Done! ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Our secrets run deep, right along side our fantasies... Especially liked the way you brought them out in the rain. Nice going Michele~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I like the way your thoughts begin as glisten and end in a wave. ThisDiamond |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
I love it when it rains at night. It helps me sleep.... But on an other note, your secrets are washed away in the rain only to surface again in the daylight. The rain changes our moods, relaxes us...brings out erotic thoughts. |
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