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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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That I slipped somewhere past your skin between the layers that was the muscle of it "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
interesting piece I think I'll be thinking on this one for awhile Enjoyed Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nice |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
I certainly enjoy the strenght of this one. Bravo Dear Lady. "If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I expect you added a great deal of strength when you did, H... Nicely done.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done...much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Helen, this is lovely, sweet friend, you always seem to delve right back to the heart of it like an archer that never5 misses the bulls-eye, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
you could say you got under their skin deep in the heart of the matter, but it would not be nearly so effective or poetic. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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