Open Poetry #24 |
Love Sets Sail |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * * As the sun begins to set Like a jewel in a crown We stand facing one another While the sun is sinking down The seabirds fly above us Gliding effortlessly in one place How we marvel at their beauty Their sheer elegance and grace Our ship of love sets sail Beneath a golden edged sky How tranquil is this setting As we begin to drift on by We snuggle up together As we sit beside the mast Far out into the sunset Our hopes and dreams are cast So much love to be made Beneath this warming amber glow And as the stars light up the sky Like a river love will flow I am in motion |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - this graphic is awesome, beautiful, and your poem is marvelous... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is beautiful..... and SOO peaceful feeling.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God I wish I could feel like this! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, and may you always sail away and may he be the captain that ebbs you into eternity's joy, yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
This poem brought out the little kid in me, my memories and back to happy days. Thank you. etoodog [This message has been edited by Robert Adamson (12-19-2002 05:45 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sue, what a painting of bliss. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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