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My Step in Time
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My Step in Time |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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My Step in Time I warm myself in the peace of you, as another day finds me alone. But I can phantom and touch the edge of memories, enjoyment sown. I border you in margin gilt, a luster, always to light my days. To balance each and every mood, your chemistry dissolves the haze. I place the love I feel in words rearranged and framed just so, softly finger the panes of you, the cold of glass warmed by my know that you are there "my step in time" if only in my thoughts and rhyme. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Very nice, enjoyed the read. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Maureen, you must know my mind played with the sounds of the words and varied the spellings... good piece here... find peace there... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maureen, you "rearranged and framed" your thoughts into a poignant "step in time" in rhyme! Very well done! Warm hugs, Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sy, thanks for reading me  Karilea, I played with those same words myself *s Linda, I don't know if you do this but I have several poems of meaning framed and sitting around the house. And even have them accompanied by crystal butterflies or cloissonne enameled ornaments that have meaning to the poems. So whenever I want to I can stop and read and remember when and why I wrote them. hugs back M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a lovely idea! No, I haven't but I just may start doing that myself! Thank you! You have such a romantic and creative soul--that is why you are such a fine poet! Warm hugs, Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thanks Linda...I just have a mind that doesn't quit. I am not so sure it's all that creative. *s M |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
It never ceases to amaze me how you frame sorrow and memory with beauty to give us a gift that is unfading. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kethry, I thank you for such a warm response. Knowing you as I do, I appreciate you more every day. hugssss M |
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