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I Touched a Star
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I Touched a Star |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I touched a Star I touched a star one seining night In a zany haunting flight And there I burnt and singed my lips By the brushing of her fingertips It started out a simple dream At least to me is what it seem It was a night of passions vend So bright I thought it was my end. What brought about this fantasy? This lovely touch of ecstasy I’ve not the slightest hint or clue Unless it was a phantom you Thought I try to get it back but But circumstance had cut it slack I could not find that star or bliss Or awe inspiring touch and kiss. And now I lay me down each night And wait upon this star to light. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, I love this. Makes me smile. Enjoyed a great deal. Thanks, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah so lilting and romantic a morning read Sy. Perhaps one night you will have the same dream again...or was it a dream?  Shall I pour? ~Morning hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
May it shine upon you once again, dear Sy...  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Very much enjoyed the read tonight, I hope you have many more a dream and again share. Sincerely Rick |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as I believe everyone should wish upon a star and your dreams will come true in courtesy of Jiminy Cricket! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Good morning, our Weaver of Words... it's so good to see these every sunrise... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, My all your fantasies make you smile. Nancy, Delighted my dear fill it up, :queeze: Rick I will and I will, thank you. Noah, Thank you and may you have your wish upon a star. Lady In White, They are so nice to write. Thank you The beaver LOL |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
It's a shame some dreams don't come true...and lucky others don't..it would be nice if at least those "really" good ones would come back though.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I suspect I would have read this in a slightly different frame of mind had I not read Toe's poetic response first. LOL But even though the giggles tickle my lips, I can appreciate the wistfulness written here, sweet Sy. *S* I don't know how many times I've tried to go back to sleep to capture a dream... but the good ones won't cooperate. *G* (Which is completely unfair, since I've had nightmares I fall back into each time I lay back down! LOL) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I enjoyed this Sy..good write... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Be most patient Sy...the star will bring the dream again...well written!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, I hope your wish upon this star will certainly come true...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, You have a mind like a steel trap. Thank you my friend. suthern I have often wondered about that. But I believe you can control your dreams,  Cpat Hair Thank you dear friend. scorpio I do believe you're right, thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, You are the sweetest, |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's like you read my mind, and touched my heart, at the same time Seymour, I do love the way you write |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Warm and lovely write on this wintery morning Seymour. Thankyou for this. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA You write the target of my aim. Chris, Your read and reply is all I need. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! May all your nights be full of the magic of passion-filled dreams. ~ and may the stars always shine down upon you and fulfill those dreams... Warm hugs EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Thank you my dear, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 The moon glows gold tonite ... I'm counting silver sparking stars ... one by one. I'll make a wish on each of them just for you ... so that all your dreams come true when this day is done. *ww* |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, another gem to ponder on. How you twinkle. Thank you.' SG |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy When a star wishes on you that is when your dream comes true Enjoyed as always |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
and may that star enlighten all your nights lovely poem Hugs, zenny The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Enigmatic is your smile In the daydreams of my wile As you set there on my desk My Randy does an arabesque. WWRS SimplyGold You are simply gold, thank you. Martie I didn't know you knew that, zenny Thank you and hugs back. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sometimes it comes when we aren't looking so hard for it; i know this is a cliche, but true, sometimes i don't know if it's better to feel that there is something out there within reach, they we keep trying to claim, or to just give up..make any sense? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Everything makes sense if you care to explain it. LOL |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Unless you're trying to explain Toerag.. (I noticed your poem did a tad better than mine?)....I just don't understand?...LOL |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, you touch the stars even when you are not dreaming. All you have to do to see the trail of glimmer is look behind you. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful as always Sey Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Only you would notice that. LOL Keth, You are sweet, thank you, Charisma Thank you sweet. |
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