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GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-01-23 07:03 AM



Silver lined
Grip of time.

Watching seconds,
Feeling moments.
Hear it tick

-Tock

Crisping words
And aching feelings.

Desperation
Soon salvation
Coming to a Master’s

Home.

Speed it up and
Hear the cries.

Mask it all
And close your eyes.

Another second
It means Blink

Now Breathe

Got it right
This time.

Only life
To keep it up.

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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1 posted 2003-01-23 07:05 AM


the time is now. no other.
and at this time, it is time for me to drag myself off to work

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
2 posted 2003-01-23 07:12 AM




Alyssa,

Liked this. Great poetess, you are.
See my note to you on my poem, "I Adore You". Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

GG
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Posts 3532
Lost in thought
3 posted 2003-01-23 07:19 AM


inkedgodess,
Thank you for the reply.
work is so fun, isn't it?!

Pat,
thank you much, got the notes
Too kind! But, if your in Cali then its 4:15 AM! go to bed :P
of course... its the same time here..!
God's blessings to you! Hugs

Always, Alyssa


- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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