Open Poetry #24 |
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Lost Time |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside ![]() |
I have no desire to make time or watch the clock any longer but I will never forget how it stood still for you and I. When you held my heart in your hands running your fingertips over the glass that you handled so carefully so as not to break the fragility over time. I still believe that to be true and I will never stop believing in you but time is not ours to slow down nor try to race against for it was never ours to begin with. My days are no longer filled with your magic or the motion of your hands that traced my face so much time has passed since then as the pendulum swings marking the time. How quickly it turns into days and weeks until they become years and turn away tainting our reflection in the glass that no longer plays the chimes for you and I. ~*~ |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Blues, ![]() ~How quickly it turns into days and weeks until they become years and turn away tainting our reflection in the glass that no longer plays the chimes for you and I.~ quite haunting. ![]() lots of love, gemma xxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hauntingly sad Lori... Be well..be happy. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just Beautiful, Lori hugss M |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, a very beautiful, but sad write. I enjoyed reading it....... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-22-2003 09:54 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have a way of taking a feeling and bringing it to clear 3-D...quite a talent my friend. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssssss) Oh Lori, this is so very sad, mny heart goes out to you as I too have been feeling this way now! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
whyd you let him go? this is sad and sweet and reflective of something beautiful at the time |
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