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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-01-22 08:51 PM



I have no desire to make time
or watch the clock any longer
but I will never forget how it stood still
for you and I.

When you held my heart in your hands
running your fingertips over the glass
that you handled so carefully
so as not to break the fragility
over time.

I still believe that to be true
and I will never stop believing in you
but time is not ours to slow down
nor try to race against
for it was never ours to begin with.

My days are no longer filled with your magic
or the motion of your hands that traced my face
so much time has passed since then
as the pendulum swings
marking the time.

How quickly it turns into days and weeks
until they become years and turn away
tainting our reflection in the glass
that no longer plays the chimes
for you and I.

~*~

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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
1 posted 2003-01-22 09:38 PM


Blues, a sad journey through past times. very much enjoyed. loved the flow of this.

~How quickly it turns into days and weeks
until they become years and turn away
tainting our reflection in the glass
that no longer plays the chimes
for you and I.~

quite haunting.


lots of love, gemma xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-01-22 09:47 PM


Hauntingly sad Lori...
Be well..be happy.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2003-01-22 09:49 PM


Just Beautiful, Lori

hugss
M

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-01-22 09:53 PM


Lori, a very beautiful, but sad write. I enjoyed reading it.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-22-2003 09:54 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
5 posted 2003-01-22 09:59 PM


You have a way of taking a feeling and bringing it to clear 3-D...quite a talent my friend. ThisDiamond
Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-01-22 10:27 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Lori, this is so very sad, mny heart goes out to you as I too have been feeling this way now! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
7 posted 2003-01-22 10:37 PM


whyd you let him go?

this is sad and sweet and reflective of something beautiful at the time

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