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Lady In White
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0 posted 2003-01-22 05:53 PM





Goodnight my Love

Palm to cheek, warmly,
Hand to chest, lips to lips, slow
Drown me in your peace


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1 posted 2003-01-22 05:54 PM


sounds like a wonderful way to drown...

nicely done lady..

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with you
2 posted 2003-01-22 05:55 PM


thoughtful and loving  
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3 posted 2003-01-22 06:05 PM


Sunshine,
My pleasure,

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4 posted 2003-01-22 06:17 PM



...Wow!  I love moment poetry.

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5 posted 2003-01-22 06:34 PM


Good poem....

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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6 posted 2003-01-22 07:06 PM


Lady.... so real, and so powerful. how blissful it is to drown in the peace that love creates. beautifully written
i'm keeping this one.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

scorpio
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7 posted 2003-01-22 07:10 PM


Very beautiful...

believe in what your heart feels...

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-01-22 07:45 PM


Lady In White - such soft words from the Lady In White...

BC

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9 posted 2003-01-22 08:37 PM




So tender and touching. Enjoyed.

Pat

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        "Desiderata"

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10 posted 2003-01-22 08:41 PM


Ahhh dear Lady...
How tender is the night.

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11 posted 2003-01-22 09:22 PM


enjoyed
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12 posted 2003-01-22 10:35 PM




(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile, yay, may this peace always fill your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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