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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Present in sequenced worlds of how me move a cartoon animal's ..to fit a groove entertain us through words we do not heed the frame of their walk is all we need. a plump rauchy gait enters bent to sneak a low crouched hunter crouches to peak his keen dog's snout samples fresh tracks could it be a chipmunk or a jumping jack? the chipmunk has just collected his basket of goods and prances carefree through the brush, understood? not expecting a barrel to be pointed to its head a cartoon finale... we as kids used to dread. but the cartoon character had a way of surprise and the chipmunk would be given talent unsurmized he'd check the hunter's gait on his trail and offer his produce there..at low sale the hunter is confused..his prey's supposed to worry he scratches his chin.."ain't you supposed to scurry?" but the chipmunk relied on an age old techinque continued to skip instead of being laid oblique. you know the end..all's well that ends well typical of a child's fairytale animated miracles... words cannot say illustrated cartoons forever here to stay [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-22-2003 11:18 AM).] |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Cool poem. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed the read Martin! Stay warm! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
I enjoyed reading this as well. Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I had a wonderful time at Disney, just to see the way animations are created and meet the people behind the scenes...it's amazing! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Martin, I love cartoons so very much, Walt Disney was truly a genius, and gave something for all the children that will never be forgotten and I will always have him as a hero to me! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this brought out the child in me, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hey Noah, Good to hear from you again, missed your comments for sometime...as you know these writings are actually little vignettes of my life...I heve been teaching myself to do cartoon characters and build my paintings around them  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Connel, Appreciate your comments, try to write on a variety of subjects..that's me Ada'doLis... You're the first in the military I see here, good to see you have an interest in expressing yourself and in commenting on other pieces. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-23-2003 12:56 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Nancy, always enjoyed the way a word would be said by the posture animated figures took  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Passing Shadows, and there's so much learning to be had by appreciating the way animation gives life |
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