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Open Poetry #24

Further Down the Spiral

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-01-22 02:08 AM

ShadowTrilogy II

Just a leaf
dangling off
a withered tree
the cold
familiar chill
of this wintered
life
leave me further
down the spiral

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-22-2003 02:29 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-22 02:11 AM

this is deep...enjoyed the first part too

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-01-22 09:47 AM

wow, this is intensely sad....more hugs

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

3 posted 2003-01-22 09:51 AM

Several ways to read this,
whoosh right through,
or flutter along...

I did both...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-01-22 09:56 AM

Aenimal
It's a one way spiral, enjoyed.

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-01-22 11:47 AM

Enjoyed every word. =)

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-01-22 09:09 PM

Thanks all see you soon take care

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-01-23 01:22 PM

Raph, I'm extending a wing to you! Grab on and we can fly above the dark clouds together!

Sending you lots of loving angel hugs.
EA

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