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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-01-22 10:47 AM



They say
“If it gets below freezing
it won’t snow…”

They either don’t
read Farmers Almanac
or live in cold.

The gray is here,
flakes are drifting,
it’s 19 degrees again…

where’s the fire?

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-22 11:03 AM


LOL.... im lucky it dont get hat cold down here... Great poem.. I really enjoyed the read. Thankya for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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2 posted 2003-01-22 11:19 AM


I'VE GOT IT!!!!



inside AND out...giggle...

was 71 degrees here yesterday...

but my boasting will be shortlived...supposed to get down to the fifties again today...wicked wicked me..

here...maybe a hug'll warm ya up?

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3 posted 2003-01-22 11:21 AM


not much different here... not supposed to snow much but the colder...tonight and tomorrow.

one can read behind the words and see more than a physical cold...

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-01-22 11:29 AM


Let's throw another log on and have some tea!
Just not outside on your bench Karilea!
It's freezing up here as well.
~Warm hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2003-01-22 02:20 PM


moving to Idaho, I have a whole new respect for what cold is loved this
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