Open Poetry #24 |
Emily's Moon |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the magical moon stays in her eyes, as she listens to storybook rhymes, serenading her along to the land of dreams, of ballerinas and barbie dolls, and soon, she awakens on a winters dawn, as the sun stays asleep, the night moon reborn, full in face with shadows of white, in the still blackened sky, she wakes up to this sight, and she wonders aloud was this only her dream, or did the moon wait up the night just to greet her [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-22-2003 07:09 AM).] |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Nice poem Michele. Made me think of my daughter and brought back happy memories. But why do they have to grow up? I guess we all get older, one day at a time. You know I enjoy reading your "stuff:. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - the moon never sleeps, I wonder why. It draws one into it, like this poem... BC |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Michele, I love this, it is precious. Thanks, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Through the eyes of a child... Such a beautiful and tender embrace. ThisDiamond |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Good words, good words. Thank you for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
touching...amazing how we can see so much through our children...they never know how much they mean to us...God Bless...Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Sweetly are spoken - a little girl's dream - before they are broken she serves cups of tea and cream her toys and joys litter her feet in plated white glow on a moony street So sweetly they are spoken - a little girl's dreams (sorry...my muse working some OT, but your poem said exactly what i picture some young tender lass to have dreamed of....) Jkf |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, this is beautiful...very touching... "Love makes the world go around" |
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