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When Was The Last Time
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When Was The Last Time |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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When Was The Last Time I'm feeling lonesome Something went amiss When was the last time You shared a loving kiss Pondering stark reality I wonder are you aware When was the last time You hugged me with care Being depressingly low Could you understand When was the last time You gently held my hand Does passion re-kindle Once excitement raced When was the last time You lovingly embraced Heart's silently scream When dejected and blue When was the last time You whispered I love you Hope ©2003 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hugs...and hopes the next time is soon for you... enjoyed the verse.. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thanks for your caring thoughtful reply Hope |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
painful words, written in a way that shows perfectly the human need for care and thought. you keep asking my dear, you deserve to be loved, hugged and kissed. enjoyed the read. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxx  learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Gemma for your cqaring thoughts , perhaps I will put the poem directly in his face Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*smile* you go girl! smack him on the forehead with it  have faith, that's what it takes sometimes... |
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