Open Poetry #24 |
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Phantasia |
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Laney Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 85Illinois ![]() |
For my Jason--- Phantasia Whirling colors of pink and red bright, soft twinkle lights trying to speak, but nothing is said I feel my wings begin their flight. Cinnamon Apple lingers in the air white feather-down comforter taunts strong graceful hands run through my hair our love is ours to flaunt Roasted marshmallows from the fire pit a trail of smoke from your cigarette a warm cup of coffee is the perfect fit a symbol of when we first met Wearing your sweatshirt; I smell your cologne I cannont eat, I'm stuffed from your love exchanging each other's past on the phone You are the answer to my prayers from up above With you I fell hard; fell something furious like the magical theories from Asia, you intoxicate me, you make me delirious for you are my Phantasia. I learned in a Philosophy class that Phantasia is the highest sensory perception.From this I was inspired. --Alana |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I would say a love poem to be savored... the one it was writen for or about..should indeed enjoy. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
alana, could you possibly write my love poems for me! You do it sooooo weeelllll! warm hugs, Earth Angel [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-18-2002 04:32 PM).] |
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Laney Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 85Illinois |
Thank you all for your kind words! I'm a hopeless romantic! --Alana |
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Siofra![]()
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
I love your imagery! It paints with a brush of talent. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautifully inspiring, sweet friend, I love it, and I say you have captivated the essence of this epiphany so well, God Bless You, may this love always fill your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alana, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, I learn something new every day...thank you for sharing |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Alana, from one "hopeless romantic" to another, I enjoyed this love poem. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Thank you for sharing with us... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-19-2002 01:52 AM).] |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
This was beautiful Laney... I especially loved the subtle rhyming scheme; it fit nicely with the mood of the poem. Jason's a lucky guy! ![]() The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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J-Carmen New Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 5Morris IL USA |
A soft answer in the dark, a warm embrace in the chilling night, a shelter from the raging storm. You are all of these to me and I strive to be your phantasia and the embodyment of all that is love. For I love you now and forever to be with all of my heart and soul. You are my soulmate and lighthouse on the raging sea. May your love allways bring me safe to your arms and may I allways give thee rest in mine... love allways, your Jay Baby. I'm not concieted....I'm convinced |
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