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Into The Well
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Into The Well |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This path of here and now to choose This greatest climb to win or lose In different text desire and need Into the well this wish concede This might or fate another time This life to reckon of the rhyme Before these eyes a single sight Into the well bleeds out by right This dialogue or silent thought This deepest want embraced and fought Before the swell of muted sound Into the well by heart be bound Copyright Kkh 1/20/03 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. I loved it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This dialogue or silent thought This deepest want embraced and fought Before the swell of muted sound Into the well by heart be bound Damn, I like that. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, just throw a coin in there and though it is not for sure a wish is always worth trying! (big hugggssssss) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
I really liked the Poe-ish repetition patterns in this: almost like a poetic chant. Cast a pebble, and make the wish before the splash. . . JkF |
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