Open Poetry #24 |
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Your wearied touch |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
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Your wearied touch. Circles brushed upon my lips. These memories are written by your fingertips. A ring of fire now reflects the growing dawn. A bed of coals in curling light, rich and wan. We grew slowly as the sun in morning motes. Just as slowly, years wear ash in charcoal coats. Holding close. The embers dull. In this embrace. Against the sun two shadows fall like smoke and lace. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautiful and sort of sad, all together... "These memories are written by your fingertips" |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Again(still), you forge your words with clay-hammer strokes on dust and ash. Quite a write Ed |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
memories written by fingertips... sigh..that's great...you're good Mikey!! ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I like the verse, too, that says... . . "These memories are written by your fingertips" This is just beautiful... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We grew slowly as the sun in morning motes. Just as slowly, years wear ash in charcoal coats. Holding close. The embers dull. In this embrace. Against the sun two shadows fall like smoke and lace. ============================ your rhymes divine soothe me weary mothmind ![]() I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Stunning. Reading this was like being finger fed peeled grapes. So sensual, so loving and so decadent. oooooowow... |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you too seem to find the words and form them like a few others here so that what lies on the page..ends up in ones heart. enjoyed mikey.. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Mikey!! This is a ![]() ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
**sighing heavily** sorry..its all I can do. I ADORE this, Mikey Guy. ![]() ~~I Love You~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*smiling* |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I enjoyed this poem!!! Neeraja |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Much appreciation, everyone. Thank you. |
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