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Open Poetry #24

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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-01-20 10:22 AM

We open doors
without realising
we're touching the handle of change.

Facing the grain
drifting through wood
like spirit in dimension unknown.

I walked through impossible structure
so unconciously
to the other side.

Branches with new possibilities
That never flourished
in the minds struggle
of behind the door.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2003-01-20 12:20 PM

Very well expressed, gemjop! I enjoyed this very much!

abbe
Member

since 2003-01-20

Posts 131
michigan, usa

2 posted 2003-01-20 01:10 PM

i like this very much...
we just never quite know what is behind the doors we face. and usually, it is other doors.
good job!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2003-01-20 08:27 PM

gemjop - doors close, but comes new opportunities. Nice write...

BC

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