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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio

0 posted 2003-01-20 07:02 AM




take me
tonight,
on a magic carpet ride,
along the moonlit skyway
through the oasis of stars,
we'll sail nearby eternitys door,
to our destination of nowhere,

stop below to rest a while
along the glorious green
where we love to play,
then picnic at midnight,
just you and me,
naked and free,
running barefoot, laughing
through the fields
of wildflowers



[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-22-2003 07:06 AM).]

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regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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1 posted 2003-01-20 08:56 AM




Michele,

Lovely dream and I love midnight picnics.


Hugs, Pat

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-01-20 08:59 AM


Michele,
Now that's a sight I'd like to see. LOL
Enjoyed the write.

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-01-20 09:01 AM


Michele, that sounds like quite a ride you had...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2003-01-20 10:28 AM


I took a magic carpet ride once...it wasn't as smooth sailing as I thought it would be


M

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
5 posted 2003-01-20 05:20 PM


The magic carpet ride sounds wonderful...tell me where and when and I will be there with my Aladin costume on.
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
6 posted 2003-01-20 05:38 PM


Aladin?
will you bring your snake too?

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2003-01-20 08:18 PM


inkedgoddess - a magic carpet ride to the moon, h'mmmmmmm.......

BC

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