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Open Poetry #24

kissing earths face

zenny
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since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-01-19 03:01 PM

Kissing earths face

The rising sun kisses earths face
chanting a song for the world to awake
All beings open up with an amazing grace
entering a new day, at the beach by the lake

In a humble cabin in the middle of the sand
A man kisses his girl to greet the light
She opens her eyes and reaches out her hand
walking outside with her loved one, enjoying the sight

Alone at the beach this couple celebrates their love
for they have shared many years
They caress each other with the gentleness of a dove
And then what the maiden hoped for, she hears

For her knight in shining armour kneels down on the beach
and asks her to forever share their lives
A sweet 'yes' flows through the air, only his ear to reach
Frantically he lifts her up, and whispers 'to happiness we shall strive'

Lovely days await this couple that resides at the shore
for their love is true and heartfelt
May happiness fill their days in galore
So that in one their two hearts will melt

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

[This message has been edited by zenny (01-19-2003 03:05 PM).]

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-01-19 04:49 PM

beautiful, and certainly worthy of rejoicing!!

Love is amazing, isn't it?

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-01-19 09:04 PM

Zenny...

the soft touch of each kiss
of your lovely lines
lifts this
poem...

thank you!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-01-19 09:05 PM

beutiful combining all the elements, sun,water,air,fire, in a love poem

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