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regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

0 posted 2003-01-19 01:59 PM

I wonder,
does genetically
defective
include one's soul?

It swishes sassy spirit,
for sure!

Mix alcohol with
this American Native,
and she can fly.

Mix love with the French
in her,
and she can soar.

Mix dysfunction
with her defection
and you've called upon
her holy, ~sieved~ soul,

and,

a nighttime of glory
prevails.

For,

God shines His
brilliant Light through
the essence of her

~sieved soul~

and a sky, full
of stars are born.

Defection to Perfection,
~of us all~,
in God's own time.
.
.
.
.

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (01-19-2003 04:36 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-01-19 02:08 PM

Amen!

Very true and powerful words.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-01-19 02:50 PM

(sigh) Yes, we are a concoction of all these essentials and stars don't live forever but what is closest to perfection is the light they can shine in the time they reveal their pupils! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is majestic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-01-19 03:16 PM

Amennnn!
In his time... he makes all things beautiful in His time...

Loved this alot, you really do have a great way with words!
Hugs
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

4 posted 2003-01-19 03:23 PM

a great power lies in your write
very nice

hugs, kelly

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2003-01-19 04:33 PM

Enjoyed much!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-01-19 08:32 PM

Let this rise
once again.

You do have a way,
shine on!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2003-01-19 08:40 PM

Mix alcohol with
this American Native,
and she can fly.

Mix love with the French
in her,
and she can soar.

Mix dysfunction
with her defection
and you've called upon
her holy, ~sieved~ soul,

smile. I'm just gonna pretend that didn't startle me a bit.

this poses an interesting question and answers itself in unexpected ways.

I liked this very much.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-01-19 09:13 PM

this poem soars thru fearlessly, really moved by its enthusiasm

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-01-20 03:48 AM

*smile* very powerful!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

10 posted 2003-01-20 09:15 AM

Thanks to all of you for reading and replying....

note: Karen....this is ~ME~ I had in mind, no one else, smiling here, .....though many fit the pattern...
And, for clarity, I am not an alcoholic, though runs both sides of family... I AM part Chippewa and French and who knows what else! Just a common, ordinary mutt; we make the nicest human pets when treated well

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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