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Love of the Loved
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Love of the Loved |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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My passion for every side of you I never tire of our lazy days entwined~ something fills my unconcious heart as flight pushes mind over the edge of what i thought i knew until there was a clarifying faith cleansing you. Greeting the pm. with hazy lazy smiles knowing i have to leave you feeling your eyes upon me as i daydream i turn and catch the smile that mirrors the thoughts you provoke in me as goosebumps stroke my skin and the knowing kisses my heart. Now here alone I'm wise with my time. With you,I'm wiser never hold back a smile. Respect in depth colour wrapping ourselves in the here and now tying a ribbon of beautiful blue horizons. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh, what a treasure of descript. Very beautiful. ThisDiamond |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"Never hold back a smile"...never let a chance to love pass you by...take nothing for granted...enjoyed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, I just love the final lines especially, sweet friend, imagining a love tyying the skies to a lady's hair as she dances gracefully with smiles and sings like a bluebird of happiness! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
This is just puuurty thanks gemma |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh,Gemma, This is wonderful. Written by someone who knows all about true love. I enjoyed this tremendously. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, this is beautiful. You know that I love it. It's just how I feel when I'm with my Love. But, you know that I know, don't you? Then, there is the "alone"......... A  for me, friend...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow, what a beautiful picture I see here! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Now here alone I'm wise with my time. I really liked those short lines and the whole of your poem. Thanks for making me smile~ |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Good poem. Wishn i could say more but, its simply just a good poem. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I'm not sure if I've ever read your work, but I enjoyed this one. I love your images and what you make your thoughts do. Jenn ~~I Love You~~ |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
So very very enchanted!! Thank you, this to my favorites |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
gemjop~ This is lovely...I enjoyed. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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