a boys first love.......a mothers thank you

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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

0 posted 2003-01-19 08:40 AM

flight of doves,
skyful of iridescent white,
falling snow cascades down mountaintops
onto winters parched grass
warming sleeping baby's breath beneath,

etheral radiant goddess of love,
woman/flowerchild
waiflike poet
vision of grace,
fair of face,
angel eyes,sparkle
pierce with cupid's arrow,
thru his once guarded heart,

a boys first love,
poetic inspiration,
rare jewel to treasure,
she beckons him
in dreams,
with softness of voice
out from his dark walls,
towards her light,

i watch his young heart
shine through her eyes,
i love her too,
this delicate flower,
she is amanda,
goddess within his tender heart

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-19-2003 06:22 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-01-19 08:48 AM

inkedgoddess
A warm and lovely write.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

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Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-01-19 04:46 PM

this is quite lovely

heartwarming and soft.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Midnitesun

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Gaia

3 posted 2003-01-19 04:50 PM

How beautiful! how lucky you are to witness this moment

Kandi
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North of Hell

4 posted 2003-01-19 06:04 PM

This was absolutely beautiful - both the poem and the inspiration behind it. Wondering if Amanda has read it...
Keep sharing your gift of words with us

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-01-19 07:25 PM

(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me cry imagining the boy and Amanda crying feeling so happy for each other and the mom crying too being happy for them both! (smiles) This also gave me hope maybe I will find true love before I die, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-01-19 08:09 PM

Beautiful Mish, I like these moments of light from you

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-01-19 08:19 PM

I never had a boy, so I do not
know this version of a mother's heart...
but I am so appreciative
of the fact that
you, do.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-01-19 09:16 PM

thanks all; it is a blessing to watch this, i
hope when it ends, as ultimately it will , he's only l6, that he is always left with good thoughts, and touched by
the experience of his first true love

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-01-20 12:12 PM

Michelle, this is so beautiful. I love the way you are seeing this. I'm glad. too, that you like Amanda. That makes it a lot easier for your son to share with you these feelings he's having with his first love.

It brought back memories of me and the first guy I was truly in love with....(not one of my crushes or puppy loves). He will always have a special place in my heart. I was only 16, too. It must have been something special to him, too, because he always talks about me to my parents when he runs into them (they live in the same town). We probably wouldn't have broken up if my parents had not made me quit dating only him. they said we were getting too serious....

Oh well, if I'd married him, we would probably still be married. Then, I never would have gotten with my wonderful Gary. That would have been a tragedy, because I honestly don't think anyone else could possibly love me as much as he does.

Sorry, Lady, I didn't mean to say all that. You know how long-winded I get sometimes.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-20-2003 12:18 AM).]

passing shadows
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displaced

10 posted 2003-01-20 02:54 AM

oh my...mine's 14 and she has a steady boyfriend...she loves him...yeah...well, they both know I sleep with one eye open and the paintball gun under the pillow...lol

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

11 posted 2003-01-20 06:37 AM

thanks again,
ethel, thats a beauitful story; there is something so innocent and beautiful about that first love , especially when it does end on a nice note;
dixie,,,,,,youre a pip, yourself!
my husband has always had something special reserved for my daughters usually neanderthal
boyfriends, that being a bat by the door!in case they needed help finding their way out

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2003-01-21 12:47 PM

Enjoyed...James

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