Open Poetry #24 |
Sugar Dust |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sifts light, to flurry and to white Another dress becomes the ball at night In sweet serene, a quiet clean Of wonderland to bed the winter of a dream Glass walls, in singular a vision calls A sweep all sense intuitive of hallowed halls In crackling fire, untamed desire Of home to build in bail and wire By patio, to propagate with summer show Another pass beyond the glass in warmer glow In kitchen style to please by smile Of simple tastes equip to nourish all in style Sifts light, by feel and some by sight Another touch upon the point illumined bright In sweet and spice the calm times thrice Of inner fields upon the walls in settings nice Copyright Kkh 1/18/03 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (01-19-2003 12:42 AM).] |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Very good write, enjoyed!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good rhyme scheme! loved it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Kathleen, this is very beautiful, sweet friend, pixie dust enshrouds the roos in your imagination always to us all, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
TD, this was a lovely dusting of imagery, and the various realms you visit with your imagination... Enjoyed it so much! Thank you! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i feel like im in a snowglobe whirling around; light and airy; loved these poems of yours |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Reads like you were brewing up a love potion, enjoyed. |
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