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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
My hand holds the pen much as it did when the nights were warm and starless and I could will moments into being Yet tonight the pen is simply heavy |
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Souls Shadow Junior Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 29 |
"when the nights were warm and starless and I could will moments into being" breathless... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
absolutely brilliant post, some nights the muses bless and others curse this night however you are blessed [This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-18-2003 11:59 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and I could will moments into being ============================ you aint heavy...youre me mothy brother   I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a striking little write! Brilliant is quite right. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Duncan, this pen here too can still write eloquently than ever but it is also so gray! (sad sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand...chin up! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
D! This is grand, grand I say... Holds the mood...creates the moment... doing that hand-kissing gesture that means perfection in Italy or whatever it is lol.. exceeeeeeeeeept... my one criticism - I'd drop the 'simply'...reads much tighter without it.. great stuff you  K |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...so I'm glad you grabbed a pencil. Don't you know I know the feel of this... Well done, Sir! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-19-2003 06:41 PM).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Long or short, your words give always pleasure to one's mind. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Heavy, but not full. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan Get another bottle of ink. LOL Very good. |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Thank you, Duncan, and your keyboard.  It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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