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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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In my opinion My royal dominion Extends to a house filled with dust My servants are shirking Where'er grime is lurking And so I will clean, for I must Dust bunnies are rising In hordes unsurprising As in a blind frenzy, I clean My royal skirts whishing While dishes I'm dishing And frankly I don't care a bean I whisk in a flurry Those dirt bits might worry But they'll not be missed in my search I fill my horizon With dirt that's arising In seeking, I crawl and I lurch Each crevice and corner Like little Jack Horner Is cleaned spit and polished in vain For too soon in creeping Dust bunnies are sneaking In a month, I'll be cleaning again Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, A delightful read, enjoyed. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kethry--I have lived this poem, but reading about it is much more delightful. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
To maintain clean and neat Is a quite simple feat.. It's no problem to keep a house orderly. But you're working too hard To achieve that reward.. Every month? Sweetheart, just do it quarterly!  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
neat write and dustfree..hehe  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
no rest for the weary |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
hahaha this is wonderful!!! but I say just don't clean, then you don't worry about it getting dirty AGAIN.. it just stays that way!  Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Mmmm....better not come to my place then LOL or...maybe you should  LOL I'm giving up on cleaning. Just cleaned the kitchen floor and then the dogs walked in after their stroll in wet clay and dirty ditches  Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey Kethry...want to come to my place? We're going through some remodeling, I'm sure I'll be able to find you dust bunnies, and more! |
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