- I Don't Know Why (songish)

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GG
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since 2002-12-03

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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-01-18 06:17 PM

Caught in dreams
I’m lost it seems.
I can’t hear my own shout
Anymore

But You hear my cries
As I close my eyes
My knees are planted firmly
On the floor.

I don’t know why,
But You say You love me
Yeah, I know You love me.

And I shed some tears
While thinking of the years.
Confused; but I’m always
In Your hands.

I think I’m alone,
While I search and roam
I seem to focus on all the
Foreign lands.

But I know I’m safe…
And I don’t know why,
But you say you love me,
Yeah I know you love me.

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Denise

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1 posted 2003-01-18 07:07 PM

This is a lovely song! I don't know why He loves us either, Alyssa, but I'm sure glad that He does!

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2003-01-18 08:25 PM

GG,
Beautifully done, with a charming refrain.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-01-18 10:55 PM

Alyssa,

Liked this as your others. But, are you speaking of two separate enitites?
You did not capitalize the last two 'yous'....Hmmmmmmmmm? Smiling...

Enjoyed, Hugs to you, Pat

I'll be out awhile, so may not get back to you tonight if you answer....
catcha later, tho.

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2003-01-18 11:33 PM

thank you each for your replies!

And Pat, whoooops ..Word doesn't like my capitalised You's, I must have mistaked it. But it IS supposed to be!

Ah and my turn in the game, I really don't like murder mysteries... but ah, playing anyway, better hurry!
Glad you enjoyed!

God's blessings to you, and hugs
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

[This message has been edited by GG (01-19-2003 03:50 AM).]

passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2003-01-19 04:43 AM

neat one!

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

6 posted 2003-01-19 04:50 AM

thank you

Always appreciate your replies Dixie

Always, Alyssa
Did I mention sleep at night is good! :P

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

[This message has been edited by GG (01-19-2003 04:52 AM).]

Souls Shadow
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since 2003-01-17

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7 posted 2003-01-19 11:31 AM

wondered if this was going to be patterned after Norah Jones', 'Don't know why' song, but it wasn't. This was good

GG
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since 2002-12-03

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Lost in thought

8 posted 2003-01-19 03:08 PM

Don't know that song! But glad you enjoyed this

thanks for the reply.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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