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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Open me up and climb inside and you may see another side of me, one you might not have wanted to hug if you had met it first. Open me up, climb inside... be prepared for a glimpse of the darkest side, my birthright, my heritage, my inhumanity. For I have wished you Evil Thoughts. I have wished that you would vaporize yourself... and leave me alone to watch the morning sunrise and golden sunset; to watch the dandelions and the irises share the fertile grounds that some greater power gifted to us all. Climb inside my nightmare, and see what awaits you. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-18-2003 10:32 AM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kacy, Love the honesty in this. completely described the dark side of me, animal that I am, selfish and self centered to the nth degree, without the God factor. Definitely something to think about, this poem. I've no idea if this is your meaning but mine fits well for me. A reminder! Thanks, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
if someone can love that wench that i truly am, then they are worth it all [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-18-2003 10:29 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Pat, that's a good parallel interpretation.inked, we all love you here.  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
For I have wished you Evil Thoughts. I have wished that you would vaporize yourself... and leave me alone to watch the morning sunrise and golden sunset; to watch the dandelions and the irises Peace Jiminy. Your 'inhumanity'...I aspire to. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun An invitation I would not dare, enjoyed. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kacy, regretfully I've showed ya'll just a tiny bit of my sassy side.......but I'm sorry to say, there is still a lot more of me........  . . Just one of the reasons I love my Love so much.....he's seen ALL of me and loves me anyhow.....something for that "unconditional love", isn't there???  But, we all love each other that way here, too, don't we.....  ~Ethel~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hugs to you today, Duncan, from Jiminy. Sy, sometimes it's best to keep a safe distance. Ethel, I'd bet your dark side is still quite warm and bright. |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Enjoyed your journey into the darkness,must be the fullmoon.Be it the individual or the collective a truthfull glimps of a denied reality.Write on Kacy. Live like it's your last day... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Genuine and wise. Liked this one...very strong write. ThisDiamond |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
we all have this side but some are too afraid to face it |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Kacy, I too feel I am incredibly multi-faceted, I have a rebellious side as you have noticed, I can speak Spanish somewhat well, I can write music, there is much more than meets the eye in us all! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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