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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Symbols In the evenings early hours Where the smell of jasmine flowers Cross the looms of delicate rune Under light of a yellow moon And the ground in sullen lingers Like the touch of lovers fingers Playing sense like piano reams Where lay the quasi-drifting dreams. And voices speak like gaming sound Like baying dogs where game is found. Those baying howls that wail and fall Each single sound that makes its call The breeze holds the aching prey Making its final stand at bay A moment’s charm away from harm With trembling heart in high alarm Fierce symbols touch the real of birth Jasmine and fear that stalk the earth |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You've transported me to your land so please now let me take your hand as you lead me from the ice and chill where perhaps I might bend your will to offer me a cup of brew and yes, invite our Randy, too... Smiling with you, Sy... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
its all so fragile, the good stuff, isn't it? your perspective put so magnificently into words, buenos dias, amigo |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Morning Seymour!! Strawberry jam on your toast to-day? Much enjoyed. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Seymour, Loved this mornings read... If my sister gives you strawberry jam I'll make your tea! ~Morning hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And Seymour, I'll just sit and enjoy the strawberry jam, toast, and tea with you all..  ~~morning hugs to you all~~  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-18-2003 09:26 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Cross the looms of delicate rune Under light of a yellow moon And the ground in sullen lingers Like the touch of lovers fingers Playing sense like piano reams Where lay the quasi-drifting dreams. ====================================== your quasi-dreams play me mothy heartstings your imagery is as impressive as your rhymes Stinkylove...most of all--your cadenced consistancy and constance to write this well each day. The Symbol for Poetry is Sy. AND winkies *L*   It's over long before her fall from grace, she's never been this far from safe. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady In White Have a seat by the heart of my fire And I will tend to your desire. inkedgoddess Jam and tea is being served, wont you join us. Chris, Just the thing for my raspberry tea. Hugs back Nancy, So we'll have a party. Hugs garysgirl Wouldn't start without you Love. JM, Now what you wrote has caught my eye And brought about a great big sigh. I think I'll sadle Randy up And stop by you for just a cup. WWRS |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And the ground in sullen lingers Like the touch of lovers fingers Playing sense like piano reams Where lay the quasi-drifting dreams. I liked what JM said...Sy being the symbol for poetry. Very cool. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan I like what JM said too, thank you my friend. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Jasmine and fear, both having a dintinct fragrance of their own. One flat out stinks! Smiling here, and hoping we all have jasmine filled days and nights. Especially you, that you might share your sweet dreams with us. Thanking you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, You always have a kind word, thank you. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Take my hand and hold it tight Walk me through the moon tonight Let me see through eyes of Sy So never love will pass me by! I must be blind to all you see, As for me, love will never be. I must learn to feel things as you do, So Sy teach me more, won’t you? Okay I might have pushed the last line but you get the question I bet? I read your words, and you open so many new doors.~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~  [This message has been edited by Mysteria (01-18-2003 12:31 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You are a rose by every meaning of the word. So take your mind and let it fly And be a beautiful butterfly. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...loved the whole thread...a great place to wake up to...yes. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
sweet |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Seymour, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I would love to learn to play so many different instruments so I can see what every symbol has, as all has a special unique voice! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing shadows Glad you enjoyed, thank you. Kellie, Thank you. Noah, Thank you my friend. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--The jasmine is blooming here with ease, a false spring at 80 degrees...such a fregrance is insane, in the middle of winter's hurricane. Loved your poem!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Loved your reply. |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
"Playing sense like piano reams Where lay the quasi-drifting dreams". I like the way that each preceding line brings on what follows it. Thanks. It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
winston A pleasure to have your comments. |
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