Open Poetry #24 |
Cardinal Suite (four of seven) |
wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
It happened When he happened Upon something And was compelled To have something More And more To the detriment Of lesser things And if something Was good And more was Better How sublime Would be… All? Unless, of course, There was something Else… |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Been waiting for this all day Ed. Great theme. Upon further review I've found I've committed all of them and most of the Ten too. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Only those who will risk going too far can possibly find out how far they can go. -- T.S. Eliot Thus is the whole of my rationalization on THAT one. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
okay okay, but for when you warm up a bit? http://www.slothwerks.com/SlothSin.html |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And was compelled To have something More And more My favorite...both poem and sin! |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Even wondrous things are sometimes never enough |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Greed as self-hate and need. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I want it all, more or less. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yessssss and that be.... that which is warmmmmmmm yesssss |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Woah... and that just blew my mind away. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
wranx~ Ah...I really like this one. So much truth in these few words. Well said. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Well wranx, you realize that you, in continuing with your Cardinal Suites, are aiding and abetting sinners like myself. It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ah! That is the crux of things, is it not? We always want more, or at least, strongly suspect that we do. Good one. Cor |
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