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Open Poetry #24
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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
0 posted 2003-01-16 09:38 PM

Daylight,
        Comes before night falls.
Singing,
        As an old man calls,
Bingo,
        To his old friend Halls.
Laughing,
        As his daughter colors the walls.
Screaming,
        Yea!, cause he sold the balls.
Daylight,
        Comes before night falls.
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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2003-01-16 10:22 PM

Interesting take on a bingo hall.
christian
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since 2002-12-18
Posts 331
2 posted 2003-01-17 12:30 PM


unprecedented. that, alone, should
get you my commends. nice take, like white
rose said.

keep on, keep on.
GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
3 posted 2003-01-18 02:57 PM

Enjoyed!
I love the laughter in the days..
But I really like the sleep (I'm supposed to get) at night.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)
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