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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2003-01-16 08:04 PM



I couldn't go back then
I can't go back now,
there is no changing, rearranging
of the time line somehow.

I've no magic formula
time travel isn't plausible
there is no way to alter things
no reality that's feasible.

So please, I beg in passing
stop begging, and stop asking
for something that's impossible
I'm sorry, it just can't be.

WhiteRose 1/16/03

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-01-16 10:28 PM


well said! point made!
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2 posted 2003-01-16 10:31 PM


Anne,  a beautiful picture accompanies your
poetry now...And this poem is so truthful.
We can't fix what has happened.  We can only
learn and go forward with what we know as
best as we can...

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