Open Poetry #24 |
Still the Same |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Still the Same Beside the glowing fireplace tonight I saw you rocking in the flickering light I said,” My, what a raw and bitter night” But in that moment you had left my sight I keep within emotions that I feel For others think I have no sense of real But you and I took vows until the end And death would never take away a friend Nobody understands what’s left behind They say hallucinations fill my mind But it is you alone who fills my heart Two soul mates still together, though apart You are my life’s companion, still the same And sometimes in the night I call your name I know that you are gone, and yet you’re here And whisper loving notions in my ear “The fireside can warm a bitter night A raging blizzard’s always such a fright I’ll set a cup of tea beside your chair For I know that you’ll soon be sitting there” It’s no one’s place to judge or disbelieve Realities I never couldconceive It’s better not to mention things I know And let the joy within my bosom flow One person’s truth is someone else’s lie One soul’s belief another would deny And who can say what’s real and what’s pretend Or if a dream’s ‘s been found around a bend? More real are you beside my fireplace Than spinning worlds that fly an unknown pace I see you sitting by the flaming light “My, isn’t this a raw and bitter night!” Elizabeth Santos |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are some things that we can never let go... and you are remembering one of those times... blessings on you, dear Lady Santos... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Enjoy those moments with him, Elizabeth. He'll always be there with you. Lovely poem, of course! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Elizabeth I felt so much warmth and love radiating off your most beautiful words. I hope all is well with you. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, That is the finest silk web I ever read. Love Sy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Had to read this one again, Elizabeth. It touches something deep inside me. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is beautiful and made me smile imagining you and your love holding hands with an angelic smile! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautifully sad...sadly beautiful |
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