Open Poetry #24 |
There is a Place |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
There is a Place There is a place I go to see Where colors paint a rhapsody Where the wind blows a symphony And I’m absorbed but totally. There is a place within a glen That gives me measure to the when That gives me time in grace and peace At least a temporary lease It Traces me a mental goal Where echoes stir a gentle soul And houses made of ginger bread Where nothing harsh is ever said. It turns the mist to sterling clear It cuts away the cancer fear It sings to me a lullaby That drives away the cruel of why. They say it is a lovely seem To me it is the human dream. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I'd love to have a gingerbread house. This sounds as close to heaven as we can get. Enjoyed ~your place~... Thank You. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
know that place quite well, you've described it beautifully! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Ah yes, Sy...I think it might be called paradise...much enjoyed this morning's poem.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling man how you manage to write such wonder daily leaves me utterly amazed. Truly exquisite as always I love it utterly utterly utterly Take me to that place my friend That waits there at the rainbow’s end Where dreams lie in wait for me Where wishes are served up for free No clouds will cover the sun’s face And life is lived at leisure’s pace No tears allowed in sunshine’s state Where never is heard I’m much too late Take me to roam around the dream Where joy is all and laughter seen Let my face feel the touch of this Love’s delight and angels kiss Take me to that place Seymour And I will live there evermore Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, It was meant to enjoy and you did, thank you. Sandpiper Thank you my friend. scorpio That is its purpose, thank you. Marsha Dream with me and we will fly Beyond the rainbow of the sky. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Sy!! I need to go there...today!! Please please...send Randy to pick me up. And off we'll fly into the sky. To see paradise, just once or twice. Loved the morning read love, ~Morning hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress It's all in the blend of the tea I mean see. Hugs and a |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
There is a place... lol.. good poem.. Thanks for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Connel Commedy is as you see it, enjoyed the reply. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
There is a place I go to see Where colors paint a rhapsody Where the wind blows a symphony And I’m absorbed but totally. I know that place well... It's as close as clicking on Seymour's poetry. *S* This is excellent! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! Perhaps one day our paths will cross there. Lovely! hugs, EA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this read |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
cancer fear it is a cancer isn't it, great image! absolutly fantastic write as usual |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks for the joy this one gave me to have read it... Regards, Sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir Thank you for your gracious time my friend. |
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