Open Poetry #24 |
Heart Aches Not Caused From Love... (a senryu) |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sometimes not love life That causes person's heart aches Just breaks that life brings |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yup... no matter how firmly you plant your feet, life slips you some black ice and your limbs make like windmills but can't stop the fall. *S* I like this very much, gg! *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You're very right, Suthern. Life's hard, sometimes... but, then I start thinking that I'm better off than lots and lots of other people. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, there are so many more in the world who are far less fortunate we are, and for that I send angel hugs out to them all as I believe we are fortunate ones! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs out to all those in the world, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, I know. We have so much to be thankful for, even when we get sad.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice reminder, but i still think it all comes down to love or lack of it somehow |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...And such is life... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* enjoyed this muchly |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I understand what you mean. I love Suthern's answer. Tsk! Can visualize that...and Michele's, too. I think all life and circumstances are related to love. It is not so much the circumstance, though terminal illness, and various physical ailments tests our endurance for sure, as is poverty and and disabilities, but love makes it all bearable. Self-love being of upmost importance. Obviously you are taking of a broken relationship. But, I still think it all boils down to love. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...This style reminds me of the sayings inside a Chinese fortune cookie...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michelle, Vandana, Nan, Dixie, Pat, James, I'm really sorry that I'm late getting back to responding to all of your replies. I truly thank each and every one of you for reading my little senryu and for all of your replies, too. I can't tell ya'll exactly how much each and everyone of you mean to me. I've been depressed for the last few days, and all of my friends here at PIP are helping me so much. I love and appreciate all of you. "Love makes the world go around" |
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