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0 posted 2003-01-16 01:28 PM


Sometimes not love life
That causes person's heart aches
Just breaks that life brings



© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-16 01:32 PM


Yup... no matter how firmly you plant your feet, life slips you some black ice and your limbs make like windmills but can't stop the fall. *S*

I like this very much, gg! *S*

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2 posted 2003-01-16 03:10 PM


You're very right, Suthern. Life's hard, sometimes...
but, then I start thinking that I'm better off than
lots and lots of other people.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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3 posted 2003-01-16 03:56 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, there are so many more in the world who are far less fortunate we are, and for that I send angel hugs out to them all as I believe we are fortunate ones! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs out to all those in the world, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-01-16 04:34 PM


Noah, I know. We have so much to be thankful for, even when we get sad....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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5 posted 2003-01-16 07:16 PM


nice reminder, but i still think it all comes down to love or lack of it somehow
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6 posted 2003-01-17 09:27 PM


enjoyed
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7 posted 2003-01-17 10:27 PM


...And such is life...
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8 posted 2003-01-18 02:12 AM


*sigh* enjoyed this muchly
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9 posted 2003-01-18 04:18 AM




I understand what you mean. I love Suthern's answer. Tsk! Can visualize that...and Michele's, too. I think all life and circumstances are related to love. It is not so much the circumstance, though terminal illness, and various physical ailments tests our endurance for sure, as is poverty and and disabilities, but love makes it all bearable. Self-love being of upmost importance.

Obviously you are taking of a broken relationship. But, I still think it all boils down to love.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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10 posted 2003-01-19 05:13 AM


Very nice...This style reminds me of the sayings inside a Chinese fortune cookie...James
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11 posted 2003-01-20 01:51 AM


Michelle,
Vandana,
Nan,
Dixie,
Pat,
James,

I'm really sorry that I'm late getting back to responding to all of
your replies. I truly thank each and every one of you for
reading my little senryu and for all of your replies, too.
I can't tell ya'll exactly how much each and everyone of you
mean to me.

I've been depressed for the last few days, and all of my friends
here at PIP are helping me so much. I love and appreciate all of you.

           

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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