Open Poetry #24 |
The Time Had Come |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
~ By Sue ~ You held me close and made me feel The things I did not think were there Our lives were good there for a while I felt that you really did care I hung on for such a long time Waiting for the man I once knew That man I never saw again All I had was just you Your drinking was too much for me The things you said they hurt me too I stuffed those feelings in so long But you always left me feeling blue Alot of time I had to think Each and everyday you were gone It was during those times I realized The time had come for me to go back home Unlike you I do not give up As easily as you always did do The time had arrived you see To get up and move ~ leaving you 1-16-03 [This message has been edited by SmartChick (01-16-2003 10:44 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Breaking new ground is not easy, enjoyed the read. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Not easy but worth the effort. Such a sincere write Sue. |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Leaving him... but finding yourself in the process - Nice introspection, Sue.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I could feel this coming from your heart. It does help to write, doesn't it? "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, I know how hard it can be to write out these thoughts but you do it so well, sweet friend, hang in there as now that you've broken away alls well will end well! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! Ma love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you are very brave Sue, and have a lot of strength and it shows in your words and actions...you will be fine M |
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