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Panning Gold
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Panning Gold |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Panning Gold I panned some gold the other day By swishing talk in pans touché It came the soil of moving lips Within the space of coffee sips It swirled around and sifted truth While dumping excess of uncouth And they’re in sparkling golden balm Lay the gold in all its charm From there we melted it to form Into a mold of human norm And with the essence of the ring We sifted out the hurt and sting. We placed it in a mind of care That filled it full of savoir-faire Gave thanks unto the spirits blend And called the day a happy end. This is the gold I seek today At every stop in every way. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
May your day be filled with golden sunshine...  Here's a link to a thread you may not have seen, Sweet Sy... /pip/Forum3/HTML/002213.html |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, sweet friend, soak up the sun and make an appropriate use of it as it turns into gold! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan,   That's al I can say. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, I try, thank you my friend. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning read as always dear Sy! How you do this each and every day if beyond me. But may it continue for many a year to come. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Some days are a dud and some days a flood. But they average out. Thank you sweet. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful write...a golden write.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Poetry is love and love is life. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: THIS, is the SY I know!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you my friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krystopher, You welcome and thank you. Sunshine, [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (01-16-2003 09:40 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Much wisdom here sy... This is 24k! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely morning read Seymour!! Great way to start the day. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I really enjoyed panning for gold with you today, Sy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun Isn't it fun, thank you. Chris Have a good one |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It swirled around and sifted truth While dumping excess of uncouth And they’re in sparkling golden balm Lay the gold in all its charm From there we melted it to form Into a mold of human norm And with the essence of the ring We sifted out the hurt and sting. Morning Sy I liked the way you were able to communicate purity with this. Thanks for the read. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, you never fail to bring a smile to my face, even when I'm sad. Thank you for that sweet Sir...... :loveya "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan My thanks are to you for the read and comment. garysgirl It pleases me to please you. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
He he, at first I thougth your gold filling fell out but then I realized I was simply drowing in your wonderful metaphors once more. Morning dear one, and you too Isabel  ~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, I just love this for too many reasons to mention. I've reread it couple times and each time it doesn't fail to make me grin, ear to ear. It's wonderful. Enjoyed. Thank you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mysteria My rose of sharon. Pat, You're one of my favorites. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I panned some gold the other day By swishing talk in pans touché It came the soil of moving lips Within the space of coffee sips ==================================  only you could come up with such clever, cool metaphors and rhymes for coffee talk.... I get moth giddy just thinkin what you could do with raspberry tea and winkies LOL  *ww* It's over long before her fall from grace, she's never been this far from safe. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I think I could pan raspberry tea especially with thee. WWRS |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
On a Clear Day, Forever by See-More Tabin waaaay too many good lines to focus on here, as each is a nugget to be weighed in pleasant memories later: just like a good poem should. jkf |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ShadowRider Wonderful comment, thank you. |
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