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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-01-15 09:52 PM

Along the ghost gray horizon unknown
To be a bit withered, withdrawn and wind blown
From the depths to discover another fair twin
As the skeptic emerges to guide from within

With the ship turning port passing faint in the night
At the helm is required to be bravest and bright
From the storms now past skirmishes breaths to be seen
This razor sharp focus through the icebergs to glean

And take hand, and take heart at the buoyance of tools
Rising up to the surface when uncertainty rules
Settled down in the concepts somewhat altered in norm
To steer calmly to waters lulled securely and warm

Along the deep edges of the mystical seas
Finds the self in discover of the mysteries these
To embrace as created of the heart that will fight
By the stir of the skeptic comes the answer so right

Copyright Kkh 1/15/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (01-15-2003 09:53 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-01-15 10:17 PM

And take hand, and take heart at the buoyance of tools
Rising up to the surface when uncertainty rules
Settled down in the concepts somewhat altered in norm
To steer calmly to waters lulled securely and warm

There is so much wisdom in your words TD~
As often as I have milked the metaphor of the sea...You have captured it perfectly and in it's entirety!

I absolutely loved this!
Thank you thank you~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-01-15 10:19 PM

i love the mystical seas,
just drawn to water, i always find something waiting for me there

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-01-15 11:22 PM

(sigh) Oh Kathleen, I'm all about mysterious, after all, for so long explorers were scared to death of sailing along Africa's shores because they believed in myth deadly monsters all existed around there, but when one explorer proved them wrong, their whole philosophy shattered into dust! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is marvelous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-01-16 04:57 PM

Excellently woven K. Even the words reflect
the skeptic's mood... Well done..

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-01-16 05:09 PM

Kathleen, beautifully written, as always...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

6 posted 2003-01-17 05:34 AM

enjoyed the calm waters!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

enchantingvamp
Member

since 2002-12-21

Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!

7 posted 2003-01-17 05:36 AM

ok here are my thoughts, I wanted to take the cloth you wove here and wrap it about myself as I took a stroll to the beach.....smiles

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

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