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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-01-15 09:36 PM



Gazing across an endless sky  
spread over a broad horizon  
leaves a pattern in starry eyes
that roam the range of thought.

An overlay of images
and all that glitters in sharp contrast
a thousand flecks of color
that go against the grain.

Transparent sheets exposed in detail
as clouds move in formation
a sure thing ever changing
to fill the empty space.

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
1 posted 2003-01-15 10:30 PM


this untrackable skyshow, always changing as we watch it,
beautiful image of all this that youve painted on the sky's canvas

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-01-15 10:34 PM


You're no stranger to the canvas either, another masterpiece on this one..
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-01-15 11:11 PM




(sigh) This is celestially gorgeous, sweet friend, may the clouds always seem as sweet as marshmallows to you and may Mercury seem more temperate that it may appear, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2003-01-16 09:57 PM


An overlay of images
and all that glitters in sharp contrast
a thousand flecks of color
that go against the grain.


I have seen those 1000 flecks  in front of me before...thought I was going to pass out
hugss
M

wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
5 posted 2003-01-16 10:55 PM


Hmmm, Bluesy.
Could it be Pyrite??

Liked this much

Ed...

Brrr!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
6 posted 2003-01-16 10:58 PM


Crisp against the portraits only time can paint. Lovely scenery. ThisDiamond
Salty
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 669
Texas
7 posted 2003-01-17 02:16 AM


such a beatiful image appears with your words.  Looking for night flecks out my window right now...since it's already dark *S*  I really enjoyed this read.


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
8 posted 2003-01-17 04:01 AM


you know I love stuff like this...good job!
enchantingvamp
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since 2002-12-21
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Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!
9 posted 2003-01-17 04:25 AM


the imagines that came to mind as i read this are still dancing behind my eyes, wonderful read!

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
10 posted 2003-01-17 11:02 AM


Sounds like a great plan - lost in daydream...
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
11 posted 2003-01-17 11:06 AM


BluesSerenade
A delight to read.

garysgirl
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12 posted 2003-01-17 11:16 AM


Lori, once again, you've painted a beautiful picture with your words. I love it..

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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California
13 posted 2003-01-17 11:41 AM




So pretty and ~real!~ Love this!


Thanks, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

FLOWERGIRL
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since 2003-01-04
Posts 40
the woods of Pa
14 posted 2003-01-17 05:14 PM


you are the thousands flects of glittering color across our sky ~ thank you ~ another gem to be kept and shared


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