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0 posted 2003-01-15 07:22 PM




          ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

           silver orb of moon
     casting tinsel beams of light
         rests in heaven's arms
      
         ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
                                  


                                    Chris Barker
                                     Jan. 2003
                                        ~~~

© Copyright 2003 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-15 07:25 PM






(sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love this, I wish for this celestial love to always smile upon your heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-15-2003 07:26 PM).]

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2 posted 2003-01-15 07:29 PM


Chris, this is perfect. May moonbeams shine on you.
Sandra

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3 posted 2003-01-15 08:00 PM


Noah - Thankyou sweet one.

Sandra - I am delighted to see your name once again and especially thrilled that you liked my tiny offering.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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4 posted 2003-01-15 08:13 PM


Chris - how did you know I love the moon, and dancing under it...

BC

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5 posted 2003-01-15 08:26 PM




Yes! This is great. Lovd that last line.  


Enjoyed, Pat

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6 posted 2003-01-15 08:35 PM


This is wonderful. You do these very well.
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7 posted 2003-01-15 08:45 PM


Bill - yes, I do know how much you are entranced by the moon   Thankyou!!

Pat - thankyou for commenting

Sue - hello!! Hope you are doing fine. Thankyou for your comments.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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8 posted 2003-01-15 09:05 PM


Very soft,  just as the moon's beams are
shining upon us.  Thanx Chris.  excellent
choice of words...

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9 posted 2003-01-15 09:10 PM


Thankyou dear Magnus - the moon is just beautiful this frosty evening.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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10 posted 2003-01-15 09:46 PM



Chris, this is stunning!

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11 posted 2003-01-15 09:52 PM


Chris, I love the way you do these, too. Very good...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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12 posted 2003-01-15 10:00 PM


Karilea - thankyou for the compliment!

Ethel - thanks so much for reading and commenting.

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Very very nicely done Chris!
Much enjoyed the read tonight.
~Love ya and hugs, Teed~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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14 posted 2003-01-16 10:07 AM


NancyLee - thanks sister of mine!!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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15 posted 2003-01-17 03:46 PM



My sister said
"read"
she's so clever...

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16 posted 2003-01-17 04:02 PM


Soleil - Thankyou to both you and your sister.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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17 posted 2003-01-17 04:59 PM


A little poem that I taught my children.
"I see the moon and the moon sees me
God bless the moon and God bless me".My grand mother taught it to me and said her grand mother taught it to her.

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18 posted 2003-01-17 05:09 PM


paladin - how sweet of you to share that with me. thankyou for reading this.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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19 posted 2003-01-18 01:19 AM


Between moonbeam's glow
living among moonshadows
love awaits to shine


Never could wait for lomg ....
well worth facing the cold
to find such a moon.

Beautiful piece Chris,
much enjoyed!

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20 posted 2003-01-18 01:26 AM


beautiful!
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21 posted 2003-01-18 09:03 AM


ctowen - lovely reply - thankyou.

passing shadows - many thanks!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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22 posted 2003-02-12 11:05 AM


Lovely Haiku.
Enjoyed!

Deb

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23 posted 2003-02-12 11:43 AM


I love poems on the moon! Thank you for this one!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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24 posted 2003-02-12 01:38 PM


Deb & Linda - thankyou dear ladies. I had forgotten all about this little ditty.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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25 posted 2003-02-12 01:46 PM


Chris, you know how much I love these. This one is very mystical.

Hugs and keep warm, Marti

'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.'

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26 posted 2003-02-12 02:10 PM


Marti - thankyou so much. I can remember the night I wrote this, the moon was really showing off - daring me to write about it!! hugs!!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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