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rOxXbabY391 Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 71 |
I'm so mad I can't explain But not at you I'm going insane I hate this stuff It's really old So I'm keeping my feelings in, Bein so bold Gotta be strong Though it won't last long I know what I feel I can't hide it, that's true I just need some time. To get over you "I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right." [This message has been edited by rOxXbabY391 (01-16-2003 01:00 PM).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Emily, please check your email. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Emily, Yes, your last two lines say it all. If this is a real experience for you, I am sorry you're going through this. I felt much anger, too, when I knew a relationship was not going to work. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Fact or fiction I think most of us have been there.Vividly written,had no problem identifying with the feeling and yes time does help with ones perspective.Enjoyed your write. Live like it's your last day... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Emily, all so real are the feelings you have penned....and yes, sometimes that is what we need...a little time and space to ourselves... Nice write... |
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