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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Just waking is a motion, like a breath slowly taking. A moment, a solution, a new life in the making. More deeply we search for need as yond lights draw us sleepy. Reaching out nourishment's feed, hunger's dream finds us weepy. Moving on the steps we learn, so passing begining's dawn, just to see the life we yearn in our hearts as pasts be gone. Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
the last line in this speaks to me of new hope and promise - I like it a lot. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
"If by chance my words find your heart than, please, let your heart find the words." Superb. At first perusal, it seemed to be rather incohesive. On second reading, it made me think. Thanks. "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 Me~ I sing to life |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
ctowen, my heart did find the words...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God! Craig! What a rhyme scheme! You've pulled it off excellently, my friend! I'm impressed to the core! |
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