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Open Poetry #24

Wick Dancing (20 or less)

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-14 02:24 PM

Wick Dancing

you dripped
in my darkness
soft flickering
of light
erasing
all the black
a wick dancing
for my sight

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-01-14 02:26 PM

ah a sensually warm image... but I stumbled ona wisk dancing..for it is the flame that dances on the wick...

enjoyed...

enchantingvamp
Member

since 2002-12-21

Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!

2 posted 2003-01-14 02:54 PM

My Gosh, everytime i read one of your piece I'm floored....you are amazingly talented at using very few lines to create enough depth to drowned in....bravo!
Loved it!

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-14 02:56 PM

Yes, Helen...you speak volumes in a few words...wish I could do that.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-01-14 03:29 PM

Excellent...I love the way you write Lady!!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-01-15 12:59 PM

short but sweet

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

6 posted 2003-01-15 01:05 PM

Beautiful write

Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-01-15 01:12 PM

Helen,
And that is the short of it, LOL enjoyed.

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