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Open Poetry #24

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Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

0 posted 2003-01-14 01:50 PM

Nothing I could write you,
Hasn’t been said.
No new reason I can find,
Hiding in my head.
No new hope to rekindle,
The flame time killed.
No new love song,
To inspire romance, loneliness is sealed.
In the last letter and call,
Are love gone, like leaves in fall.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most.

enchantingvamp
Member

since 2002-12-21

Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!

1 posted 2003-01-14 05:21 PM

This was so sad.....it made me picture someone sitting alone around dusk, as the fall leaves blew dispassionately in the cold wind, great write!

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

2 posted 2003-01-14 05:30 PM

Thanks

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-14 06:05 PM

It's true that everything has been written at some time or other....but each person tells the same thing in a different way. Odd isn't it? I enjoyed this.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-01-14 06:50 PM

sad isnt it when you finally know its the end?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-01-15 03:47 AM

hmmm...sad

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