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Hoping You Can Relate
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Hoping You Can Relate |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Hoping You Can Relate By taking my heart To do as you please What is the purpose You constantly tease Is this some game I'm wanting to know You tug at my heart Bouncing to and fro Arriving with flourish Then drifting apart Is there reasons for Tormenting my heart Have you the answer To rid me of doubt Words I am yearning My heart reaches out Pondering the silence While I patiently wait I recite from memory Hoping you can relate Hope©2003 |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hope, yes, finding someone to relate is very important......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Ethel for your thoughtful reply and understanding Hope |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Hope, Yes, I can relate. Hope you get the answers you want and need soon. I like your poetry, but never see you responding much. Hugs and warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Opening our hearts - to one who can relate...That's what it's all about, Hope.. and Hoping we all find that place in another's heart... Nicely said, H... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hope - Yes, couples really need that certain connection with one another. Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Good read HopeS. "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Trying to find out just where he stands ....Not a bad thing to do at all. *S* Nicely said ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Exactly Salty , shall we still connect , I shall ask him direct LOL Hope |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
one of my main faults is that i have trouble letting people get close enough TO relate, being able to do that is more than half the battle i think. Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
well written and to the point, i liked this |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) I believe love has to have rules and this is the platinum rule thatn must be taken to accord as faithfulness is the anise that relaxes the soul! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like this one...nice |
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