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Waiting For Me
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Waiting For Me |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WAITING FOR ME” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Tomorrow I'll walk the hot desert sands and into a canyon not knowing if it has an end, yet I know that you will be waiting for me on the other side… ~~~~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, just as all your others, this is beautiful...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a real show of faith in this love, willing to go to the depths for someone |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent BC...wouldn't it have been awesome if all the men who departed on a trial, left with that same strong sense of loyalty within one they loved... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ha! She should get a jeep and come find you, lest you not be up to the kind of love ......oh, nevermind, you get the picture..smiling here... If this is meant to imply some personal battle which must be gone through alone, first, then I am way off base. But, clearly it is about trust and loyalty and romance....which you write so well. Re-reading and having heard the news of the many soldiers going overseas, this poem would be quite fitting for them. Enjoyed this as I do all of your poetry. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (01-14-2003 07:16 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*smile* you always make me smile |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
so bill, i was sitting on the moon last night at midnight expecting roses, chocolate and wine, and you stood me up........... que pasa amigo? |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A man who'd take on eternity for love... All righty then... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm, love these thoughts.... You know where I'll be standing.  ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Bill, I have already walked the Gobi desert for so long and now I have anothet Sahara to cross! (sad sigh) This is touching sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
An oasis, in a person, delightful  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
WOW!!! So few words, such impact. I think she should pick you up; you should not have to endure the heat of the desert. If she can't pick you up, make sure you have lots of water with you. Huggles, Marti |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Thanks Bill for sharing this motivating poem. "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Says a lot...James |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
this one is being added to my library for sure! Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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