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A Room Full of Rhymes
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A Room Full of Rhymes |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas 
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Have you ever been caught in a room full of rhymes when everything you said rhymed all the time and you just about made yourself sick when someone yells…Look! There is a Tick. So you look over… to see what is there and you find a dog that is completely bare and you ask yourself just how could this be that a tick could stick on a dog with no hair. Suddenly the door opens by Fuzzy the bear. Madder than a mad hare might be cuz he is the bear that is supposed to be bare and that dog just does not belong there. So Fuzzy bends over and sits on bent knee tells the dog that he has to leave Go on get up he begs and he pleas and the dog kind of snarls but finally agrees So Fuzzy and I go on our way Rhyming that night and all the next day I ask Fuzz how we get out of here He replies dunno but let’s have a beer. So we go to the pub and we sit on the stool Here comes the bartender and he sure looks cool Fuzzy begins to shiver and shake I ask Fuzz what’s wrong for goodness sake? He points his finger and said look there I looked all around and then ask where He whispers his words in noticeable fear My God! The bare dog and he works here.!! I look at Fuzzy and we start to run This game is beginning not to be fun I know one of you out there has the key Look in your pockets and on the TV. There’s no bathroom here that I can see The beer’s running through me and I’ve got to … Just Hurry… please hurry I beg and I plea!!!!! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
ROFLOL I loved it! I've been trapped in a mind that rhymes all the time... That room doesn't sound like a great place to be! Though the stories of others there sure are great. haha still grinning here, keep it up. Always, GG - And so it was that time stood still - |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ok, you've already told me that fuzzy wuzzy wuz a guy but that doesn't mean he can't look out for you when you gotta go... What other options do you have exactly? You gonna keep your legs crossed all night?  Love this poem Salty~ |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
GG Makes me wonder if your not holding that key. Huhhh? ------------------------------------------- BluesSerenade Ok you have me giggling now...and that is not a good thing in my predicament.  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
now this is creative..got me grinning  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
they key? oh yea.. ummm.. I think I lost it while I was rhyming one time. err no, that wasn't the key, it was that big green juicy lime! ahahaha sometimes I'm so funny I laugh at myself. have you tried taking a crowbar to the door? err no, you better not get up unless its for the bathroom! Always, GG - And so it was that time stood still - |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, Salty(girl)......  I love this. It's so cute and funny. I like old Fuzzy Wuzzy....  As far as the having to go part, I've been in that predicament before and it's not fun.... I always get tickled about something or other, too and that surely doesn't help.........  "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very creative, and cute. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ever read animal farm? ( smiling) one can tell a lot of story sometimes with what seem to be amusing characters.... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This was an absolute hoot. LOL!!! Giggles are always good for the soul! Hugs and Happy Holidays to you and your loved ones. Marti Let our love circle the world and |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem has everything-- All salty and nice! You perked up my morning With this sugar and spice. This tickled my fancy, I giggled with glee For I know what you're saying 'Cause this happened to me! ~ Loved this! happy hugs Linda |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
omg..... I cant believe what i have just read... That is truly a good&funny poem.. Good job. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Salty A real salty tail, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed the moring read! Very clever write! ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Thank you all for coming to see me my friends Ethel is serving tea with a grin passing shadows were seen floating In the hall. Seymour ate the cookie and became very tall ecrivan and Connel were singing to the Blues Serenade Marti applauded for the show that they gave Enchantress enchanted us all with her magic We lost Cpat for a moment it was really quite tragic. Earth Angel flew over and sprinkled her dust Our guardian angel the one that we trust. Thank you all for entering the looking glass with me Now if we find GG ….we should find the key. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I loved your poetic and rhyming reply to our replies!  happy hugs, EA |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(laughing) Wishful thinking on your part... you are just hoping I'll get lost...the tragedy is I keep finding my way back here. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Figures ...you would find your way. But seriously we looked all over for you.  |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
I think I've been in that room of rhymes, and it was really rhymy...*grin*~! Enjoyed sistah sistah~! ~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Salty - a'hhhh, Fuzzy Wuzzy my favorite bear, or is that bare.? Sweet write... BC [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (12-18-2002 08:06 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Salty, how would you like your tea?????  I liked your second poem, too...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
a TOne of voice Kinda makes you ill doesn't it Bill Fuzzy is a bare bear, but you just got to love him. He's such a sweetheart & so were you for dropping in to read. Ethel I'll have my tea with double sugar double cream served with the mad hatter and possibly the cpat hair.  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Salty, I've been stuck in a rhyme before although it wasn't as funny or as well done as this. I love the fragment thought that you get when you need to go, you portrayed it wonderfully accurately. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Why Thank you Kethry....I consider that a complement. Now that Ethel is serving tea...we may all be in the same boat. In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Don'tcha just hate when all you can do is rhyme, all the time....no matter how, it happens now.... Love your poetry yes, so Cointenly. Thanx Salty, this brought a grin to my chin...and for this, you surely win!! |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Oh I just love it when I win....Thank you Sir Magnus. and yes I do hate it when that rhyme thing comes to haunt me. Well when it's not making sense and driving me C R A Z Y. |
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