Open Poetry #24 |
Consumed By Love Completely |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Alan Ayers * * * Kiss me softly on the lips And whisper words of love so pure You now have me at your mercy For this love there is no cure It flows throughout my veins As it fills my inner being Before you claimed my heart There was no love that I was seeing Let's savour love's sweet nectar A blend of passion so divine We're consumed by love completely As you move your lips to mine We'll give in to our desires As our spirits are set free And as our two hearts beat as one You'll become a part of me I am in motion |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful poem Sue, and your continued use of graphics enhances very well.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello, Sue This is a beautiful poem, as is all your poetry.....Thanks for sharing with us.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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angelfriend Member
since 2003-01-11
Posts 52Michigan USA |
I love the poem and the picture. I can relate to them both. Romance is the best. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wouldn't that be nice? *sigh* |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
I really enjoyed this piece, gave me warm fuzzy feelings....smiles Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - a'hhhh my friend, there is no cure, I find it amazing... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Sue, this is lovely, sweet friend, I wish for love to always consume your heart as you are so deserving of such treasure! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ah Sue, no one writes love poems any better than you. The picture is stunning! Hugs dear friend, Marti |
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