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One Fell Off The Pedestal
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One Fell Off The Pedestal |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
I think back on the years I gave you ( wondering how ) Could I not have known. Did I not open my heart and all I was pouring myself out into your handssaying know me, taste me, love me, if you can. ( wondering how ) You found it so easy to discard me ( wondering how ) in all that was wise from living did I not see what you were doing. Or Did I? Perhaps I was content to let you use me knowing in that deep dark part of myself that was all I could ever have of you. ( wondering how ) Will I ever be able to think of you again without my stomache churning wildly as bile rises in my throat. ( wondering how ) |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
OHHH  I've read so much tonight that I can relate to whats been goin on in my life. This one especially. I really enjoyed this a lot. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
great expression...i know how it is to wonder.. Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
Thanks for the remarks.....makes me warm. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's hard to wonder, and then even to know, but the sooner the better...acceptance is the key. Move on to other thoughts that will make you smile. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
yes yes i've asked this question before.............. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sometimes if you wonder to much, the truth you dont want to know, whispers in .....and then its a hard toss of the dice on whether or not you want to know |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Leona, it's good to get your feelings out like this.......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
My heart goes out to you. Sometimes, we are the last to find out, and it is so difficult to accept the truth about someone you loved and trusted so much. It is devastating and too often we think we did something to cause it.... though we didn't; and, that somehow doesn't help the sense of betrayal go away...You wrote a good poem, for I think many can identify with it. Look forward to more of your work. Hugs and warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Leona, my heart goes out to you, I just lost my swetheart and I will always love her so much but I'm worried she may always think of me as bile! (sad sigh) This is so deeply heartfelt, sweet friend, I send angel hugs of comfort your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Leona, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You may have been pushed, or perhaps you just jumped.....to safety. I liked this one as well! Ed |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
thank you everyone who had heart warning comments.......that's why i love it here. Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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