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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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Erasing- painted smiles, on painted faces let them melt with their frozen eyes, looked so real to me movement, no motion, just movement breathing but not alive The sun shines but they see no light only clouds floating over their heads I am living proof that ghosts exist. Which is an oximoron but I don't care ;) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) One cannot gratify oneself with the needs of others, it all must start with actually making a smile for oneself then approaching the herd! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is deeply heartwrenching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I wish I could say i wrote this but I'd rather thank you for writing what i feel everytime i go outside. great work as always W raf |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice work!! Much enjoyed! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Wind~ I really like the touching realization of this poem. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well done Wind!! Enjoyed this. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, I know that I've said this before, but you really do write with such maturity. You have a lot of talent, little friend.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wind, very descriptive and somewhat angry. Well done! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, you learn quick |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
now that i see this "if i cry you wont be here to see it" i say you should cry sometimes thats all we can do Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, Liz - People just don't look past the ends of their noses, do they?... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
enjoyed this.... |
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