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bluRaven
Junior Member

since 2003-01-08

Posts 18
Richmond, VA

0 posted 2003-01-12 05:31 PM

Remember when life was easy?
All you had to do was cry to mother
And there was your bottle and
You smiling so empty,
yet cute.
She loved you.-
Now life is so hard
And you can't disregard
The hate that is burning.
All day, you feel it within your soul, turning,
Hoping the love will stay
But without giving love a chance
you-
Run away...

"~Sometimes you have to forgive someone because you want them in your life."~~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-01-12 06:38 PM

Hate we have controls and keeps us from
loving....Difficult, though not impossible
to overcome..

Hope it works out for ya..

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-01-12 06:42 PM

bluRaven, I could feel the emotion in this poem. If it's about
you, I'm sorry that you're feeling this way...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2003-01-12 06:43 PM

I'll go out on a limb here and say hate's a bad thing. Good poem.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2003-01-13 03:24 AM

bluRaven,
good poem, full of emotion.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

5 posted 2003-01-13 03:30 AM

deep...
and darker (to me)than you intended...

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-01-13 03:42 AM

life used to be easy, yeah...*sigh*

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2003-01-13 09:16 AM

Life is an experience - from beginning to end... We have no choice but to learn as we go... and hopefully use our lessons wisely. Expressing ourselves poetically surely helps, doesn't it?

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-01-13 09:21 AM

bluRaven
Yes sometimes that happens, enjoyed.

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